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  1. A great epilogue. It closes the whole story in an incredibly interesting way. It was really needed.
    I like seeing Sherlock as such a human being. Full of emotions he doesn't understand.
    And this piece on astronomy and Mycroft made me very happy. Sherlock removed all information on astronomy only because he knew that he would never be able to match Mycroft's knowledge in the field 🥺

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    1. Hi ^^ Thank you for spending time to read this, and even left here such a kind comment! I’m really glad you like it. Yes, that thought on the astronomy part was inside me for so long, and I just needed to write it out, thus this epilogue ^^ (I really intended to stop at Chapter 12)
      Anyways, I want to grab this chance to say that I bookmarked your story as well. I really liked the part that when Mycroft stood up to take Vivian’s bullet for Sherlock, he kept telling him that “It’s alright”. I feel that it would surely be his reaction if ever been hurt: take care of Sherlock’s feeling first, before his own physical hurt.
      Sending kudossss ♥️

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      1. oh i'm glad you enjoyed my work!
        I also think Mycroft would always put Sherlock first, so he started calming his little brother down first 🥺
        I wrote it on impulse and I did not even count on such a lot of interest (for me over 100 views is a lot).
        Coming back to your work, you surprised me pleasantly with this epilogue and I'm glad I was able to read it and leave a comment.
        Thanks for this update ♥️

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