Comment on Four Fragments of Jim

  1. whitecrow

    Great commendations on this amazingly well crafted fic. You handled this au so well and kept the continuity brilliantly. The characters were so true to what we know from canon yet had totally different but totally believable lives. I must echo another commenter that it was so good that Spock has his own life. Loved loved how Jim said that the other Kirk saw the stars first but he had seen Spock, and hence his great love. So romantic but so delightful. You are such a talented writer, and constructed this lovely long fic so very well. Kudos to you!!!

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