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  1. Loved this a lot!
    Just one suggestion, it looks like you meant to put paragraph breaks in about 15 more places but you didn't put that extra blank line between them and I know a lot of people choose not to read fics without proper breaks since it's harder to read when it looks like one giant wall of text and it'd be a shame for them to miss out on this :)

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    1. The page breaks do show up on mine but thanks for letting me know they don't on yours, I'll amend it now :) x

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      1. I think you misunderstood. There are some paragraph breaks but there should be more for example after the sentence: "His eyes are closed but Dean doesn't even need to see them to know that his brother is drunk." And before "Come on then, Buddy." Basically in fic if you started a new line there should be a paragraph break. It just makes for easier reading :)

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        1. All sorted, hope that's better for you :)

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