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    Regulus started laughing at the irony—was this his eternal punishment? To come back to life as a muggle? He was very sure he was dead, he remembered the moment his lungs gave out.

    He kept laughing until the laughs turned into a sob. As he sobbed, the bed started to rattle and a nameplate fell off the wall. Accidental magic.

    Regulus comes back to life in a new body only months before the Dark Lord does. He's not sure if it's a gift, or a punishment.

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  2. 27 Oct 2019

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    Holy shet this is awesome

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  14. 16 Oct 2019

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    I enjoy Regulus here, even though he DOES come across as almost obscenely doormat-like and naïve, especially when it comes to Harry’s bad attitude and snapping at him, not to mention Regulus 180 degree turnabout in regards to his beliefs. Not that it isn’t possible if highly improbable, but it does make him seem pretty wish-washy if he changes a lifelong belief system he’s always upheld so easily! I personally think it would be more believable if Regulus still turned against Voldemort due to his own morally appalled reaction to Voldemort’s Horcruxes but still maintained belief in superiority based off blood purity - it would be more logical for him to follow the line of thought that Voldemort as a madman is an exception to the rule of blood purity (presumably because Regulus doesn’t even know Voldemort’s true identity) than the rule of thumb for it.

    And of course, Harry’s attitude could do with some major adjustments :P I’m not saying he doesn’t have reason to be short tempered, but he seems particularly keen to lash out at Regulus! It really doesn’t make sense that Regulus can maintain a crush on Harry when he acts like an ass lmao.

    Minor critique of the author’s writing is that it’s admittedly somewhat bland and fails to carry across more nuance subtleties or emotions that aren’t blatantly spelled out due to the lack of description. It’s always “harry said this,” or “regulus said that”, without better use of words such as “harry snapped back furiously”, “regulus drawled out arrogantly”, etc etc.
    I really think if the author can master conveying emotion through descriptive terminology then their writing will improve a thousand-fold!

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