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    When a battle with a corrupted Gem leads to unexpected consequences, Steven and Connie are forced to reveal more details about their magical adventures to Connie's mother.

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    17 Feb 2017

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    This is a wonderful piece of writing, and I especially loved you have handled the character interactions and personalities very well. Definitely one of my personal choices for how to properly write a Steven Universe story. You have definitely captured the tense moments and dialogue very well, and everything felt like it should be literally a Steven Universe episode as of itself. There is humour, danger, and hurried explanations in the way of the Steven Universe world, and I wouldn't be surprised if something like this would happen eventually in the future seasons of Steven Universe.

    While I have read a couple of "how Priyanka met Stevonnie" fics, this one ranks among the top I have read so far. The dialogue and revelation of the fusion fits the characters very well, and I don't blame Connie's mother for reacting the same way she did in this story due to the danger happening to Connie and Stevonnie's personal feelings towards the Maheswarans.

    I love how you have explored Priyanka's moments here, she might be a little over-reactive, but that's understandable because she knows next to nothing about the gems save for those presumably Connie told her about. While this may be a one-shot story, it's well handled and perhaps in future I would like to see an aftermath in which Connie and Steven talks to Connie's parents, coming clean about Stevonnie's fusion and existence.

  2. Public Bookmark 22

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    S asks Pearl out for their first date. Unfortunately, it's a breakfast date, and Pearl isn't used to eating.

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    07 Feb 2017

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    A very interesting take on the thoughts of Pearl with regards to Mystery Girl, and the character interactions are really spot on to their canon counterparts.

    I really wonder how Pearl will reveal to Mystery Girl her true identity as a Crystal Gem? And what would be the consequences? It would be quite interesting to read that reaction scene.

  3. Public Bookmark 16

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    After Panchaea, Adam returns to Detroit, determined to expose the Illuminate. His fate is entwined with another as they both seek answers about their past.

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    01 Jan 2017

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    Love the attention to the Lore and character interactions in Deus Ex: Human Revolution as well as hints to the original Deus Ex Series.

    Everyone was pretty much in character here, and I especially LOVE the battle sequences. Quite interesting to see both Adam and Madison's thoughts as well as their actions during the fighting scenes.

    Can't wait to see what else the project 'Proteus' means and such!

  4. Public Bookmark 67

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    The story will cover 4 years of RWBY and JNPR in their time at Beacon starting at volume 2 ep 7's end. Arkos Primary Fic. Cinder never attacks Beacon. The group deals with problems as they arise and grow into the Huntsmen and Huntresses they are destined to become.

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    01 Jan 2017

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    Definitely one of my favourite Arkos fiction pieces out there!

    Love the interactions between the Knight and the Roman Warrior Goddess so much, and it's really nice to see the eventual culmination of their relationship after going through thick and thin.

    Can't wait to see what else they would be doing in the chapters to come!

  5. Public Bookmark 82

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    In the aftermath of Beacon's fall Ruby and what remains of Team JNPR travel to Haven City to avenge their fallen friend, with help from a new, but mysterious friend while Jaune struggles to come to terms with Pyrrha's death and his feelings for her.

    Meanwhile Weiss, wanting to help Ruby, discovers a dark conspiracy in Atlas and fights against with help from other friends.

    Blake aims to take down the White Fang alone and make Adam pay for what he has done.

    Yang struggles with the loss of her arm, her feelings towards her friends and her family, and her mother.

    And Ozpin awakens to find an evil man he thought long dead.

    All the while a man from Cinder's past returns to stop her and Salem's newest pawn rises.

    The fate of these young warriors' battles could decide Remnant's destiny.

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    01 Jan 2017

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    Thank you for liking the Remnant Knights. I have crafted a full-fledged backstory on them, and I hope others will love it as much as I did.

    I always had this idea of a fanfic which focuses on a legendary team of warriors drawn from all four kingdoms of Remnant, who all swore an oath to protect Remnant at all costs. I just hope I can make it come true in RWBY: Crucible.

    Glad you like Shadow Reaper. He's the first Remnant Knight to appear, but he most certainly wouldn't be the last. There would be quite a few more making their appearances soon, especially Supreme Grand Knight Master Seraph, Tranquility and of course, Sharp Strike and Argentius. I hope they will awe the readers in their own unique way as well as answer some of Ruby's questions when they finally meet. Oh, trust me...their individual weapons are unique, and I can't wait for them to appear finally in Destiny of Remnant.