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Ugh, still.... XD now I am breaking cold sweat, LOLs...
Relax! This is definitely a great story, you have done very well so far, and lots of people seem to like it to! This adventure is just beginning, a writer sharpens his skills everyday. You've got what it takes. Ugh, sounds patronising, sorry. Forgive and old bookworm.
Ah thank you, I need all the input/comment/criticism to mold this story into a masterpiece, so if you want to say a thing or two I can improve, please do.It took so long for me to update this story because - truthfully, I have 2 unfinished stories that I 'tried' to update as regularly (in FF net)I just hope everyone will be patient enough, I am aiming for end of this week.
All great things to those who wait! Take your time, and I think that, should you wish to improve yourself, only time,experience and books are to be consulted ,keep trying until you are satisfied . It must be difficult to write the way you do (technology is a strange for older people, you know ).We'll all wait patiently. Thanks for your kindness and for having sharing your work with us all.Keep calm and carry on