Comment on Burn the Bridges

1. Lena Sun 26 Feb 2017 07:02AM UTC

   Excellent story! Bill's self-pity and defeatism contrasts perfectly with Hillary's tenacity and persistence. I think he really drew a lot of strength from her support and was quite depressed at the prospect of having ruined that. Knowing it's his own fault certainly wouldn't make him feel better. I like how Hillary stops Bill from getting too eager but leaves him with a sense of hopefulness at the end. Great job!

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2. 1. Girlpower Sun 19 Mar 2017 06:07AM UTC

      

      Thank you. I appreciate your feedback :)

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