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That was a masterpiece! I really enjoyed how you used a detailed description of Alec's choice of clothing to show just how much thought he put into this outfit, well played. Everything just felt right in this story, you actually know what you're doing and it shows. Don't think I didn't see what you did with the repetition of "Magnus, who" because I did and it was genius. I hope you're currently working on your book and did this just as a vacation from it, because you should be. Please teach me, master!