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  1. The words "Lunar" and "Crossing" against a backdrop of space with a crescent moon creating the "C" in "Crossing"

    Your writing flows nicely between paragraphs and kept me so engaged! I like the amount of determination and subtle uncertainty you write Kiwi with. I feel you have a good balance between their confidence and their fears. I also really like how you described Kiwi's experience with the earthsong. When I played Wandersong, the bard seemed to get more magical over time and I thought it was from the effect of the earthsong too.

    I'm curious to see where you take this!

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    1. Thank you!
      I'm excited to show what will happen, too!

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