Comment on The Siren's Song Affair

  1. Well done. I think you captured Napoleon's character very well. Also very well written, though there are a couple of typos here and there ( i.e., "listing should be "listening" and "From what you have told me you and from " the second "you" should be deleted.

    Otherwise, Kudos! Keep writing! :)

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    1. Thank you for taking the time to read the story and writing a comment! I'm not surprised about the typos I had hoped I got them all. One of the reasons I don't usually write for a prompt if it is due the next day. I appreciate you pointing them out!

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