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  1. This is such a lovely piece, with great rhythm and wonderfully evocative language. Other people have already picked out some of my favorite bits (especially the final line!), but I also really liked this part: Claws and corpse-lights and chittering things all waiting to pull you down under, be you moon or be you maiden.

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    1. Iroh, playing water earth fire air

      Thank you so much - I'm particularly glad that the rhythm worked for you (and I'm really pleased that people liked the final line!).

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