Comment on Banana Pancakes

  1. Oh my gosh, I love this! The characterisation is perfect and the dialogue works so well. And I love the closing line... You really captured Beth's mischievous ways in a way we didn't get to see in the game. Thank you for writing this!

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    1. I'm really glad you think so! I wasn't sure it would go over so well. Thanks a lot for taking the time to comment, and for such a nice comment as well! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. There isn't much to go on in the game, but I'm really glad you think that it fits well. Thanks again for your kind comment.

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