tip: katekyou "alternate universe" sort:>words
I haven't read this story in many years, but your comment is certainly true. Where were you when I was having these stories bete'd? Obviously, I could have used more editors to find my mistakes. When I write I know what I'm trying to accomplish, which means I don't always see when I've missed something because I think it's there since it's in my head. Didn't you know you were supposed to be able to read my thoughts.