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Glad you liked the story, despite all the mistakes I made. To be honest, I wrote this story MANY years ago and haven't reread it for a while. I think I wrote it before I discovered that they had discovered what happened to the Anasazi. And I'm afraid I used the Lakota language because I have a Lakota language book. I think I figured it was another planet and time, so could get away with another language. I guess I should put warnings on my stories that while I do as much research as I can, I'm not always as accurate as I would like. Nickpick all you like. I may not always like to hear what I did wrong, but it's good for me to know so I don't use bad info in another story.
That's why I love reading your stories... You take constructive criticism as a springboard to making your stories even better *and* you pay attention to grammar, spelling and punctuation. Your plots, characterizations are great and I love just the way you use words. Keep writing! You can only get better. :))