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  1. ArtsyGirl on Chapter 10 Wed 14 Oct 2020 11:07AM EDT

    A nod to a great trilogy of games.

    The new characters you've established are really interesting and a breath of fresh air. It would be curious to see how you bring the story forward with them :D

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    1. Neona_Nyx on Chapter 10 Sat 17 Oct 2020 12:11AM EDT

      I do have another chapter finished, but I'm starting to do updates 2 chapters at a time so I am currently writing chapter 12. So both 11 and 12 should be up in a few days. as for the other chapters, those girls will be a part of this but I'm also planning on doing other stories for them so I can focus on them and which guys I'm pairing them with.

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    2. Neona_Nyx on Chapter 10 Sat 28 Nov 2020 04:02AM EST

      sorry life kind of threw me a fast ball in this last month- but I finally got around to updating this

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      1. ArtsyGirl on Chapter 10 Sun 29 Nov 2020 05:27PM EST

        A nod to a great trilogy of games.

        Some moments in life can be a bit overwhelming, but I hope you’re doing well and that you’re taking care of yourself during these times.

        It is so cool that you updated tho!

        Finally Circle and Gav talked things through, sort of, and as a result seem to be on the same page about their pining feelings for each other.
        Smut can be difficult to handle, but the positive thing about writing it is that through practice you’ll get better. If you want to up your smut game then it’s good to do research into how some things work and good references are things that help out as well. Something that also helps is reading smut of differing qualities and analyzing the strong and weak points of it to find things you'd want to carry over to your own work. And if the topic may be a bit uncomfortable for you then you don’t have to pressure yourself as a writer to go that far because many great works can be written without going all they way to smut territory.

        Oh and the MysMes easter egg in Circle 6 chapter was cute. The character used seemed to be very fitting to the situation in the most amusing way.

        Good luck on your endeavors. I’ll be looking forward to future updates!

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