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  1. I’m liking your concept but it gets confusing on whose point of view it is and you keep using the wrong gender pronouns for the relevant person which makes it confusing sometimes

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    1. Hi, I'm glad you like the concept of the story. I know there are many errors in pronouns and other things, I am very sorry, there are times when they escape me and it is not until I publish a chapter that I realize the error. Since English is not my language, I am looking for someone who can help me in the editing process so that I can improve my writing.

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