Comment on Ice Queen Victoria Thaws Her Heart

  1. "At that precise moment, Victoria lost control of her grumbling bowels and violently “sharted” through her sheer, rain-drenched panties, peppering Max’s open mouth and face with a spray of finely divided droplets of hot, pungent diarrhea. Max squawked and let her hold on Victoria’s thighs slip briefly, causing Kate and Victoria to lurch further over the lip of the building, before Max tightened her grip and halted their plunge, her shouted reply muffled between Victoria’s buttocks. “Victoria! I’m getting tired and I can still feel you starting to slip! I had to swallow some of your poop and my face is still planted in your messy butt!” Kate started weakly laughing, joined by Victoria’s guffaw," This part gave me quite the laugh which is dangerous seeing as it is 1 am and I just busted out laughing gladly no one from my house was awakened. Anyways thanks for the laugh it does not go unappreciated

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    1. Thank you, Felix, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my scat humor, I'd tried to "ironically" reflect off of something said earlier when Taylor was advising Tori on how to approach Kate:

      Victoria stomped her foot in frustration. “Damn, I wish that I’d been nicer to Caulfield, she might know more about what’s wrong with Kate, but how do I approach Max about this, now?”... Taylor smirked and patted Victoria’s shoulder again. “I know that you secretly crave some Caulfield, Tori, but now you are going to have to ‘eat a mile of her shit in order to sniff her asshole.’” Victoria grinned as she wiped a tear from her eye. “I wish it was really that simple, Tee.”

      You are the first reader to even mention this, but admittedly, being my second LIS-based fic, my efforts are a bit heavy handed, so I'm very grateful for your comment.

      Last Edited Sun 07 Jun 2020 04:10PM UTC

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      1. Yo it's Felix made an account on here. I'm glad you enjoyed my comment. Your work is good and you are doing amazing. Keep up the awesome work.

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