Comment on Territorial Dispute

1. DPPatricks Mon 03 Feb 2020 10:03PM UTC

   

   Oh, I love the changes you made, Maria; very nice. And the whole story is a wonderful blending of S&H and Dirty Harry Callahan. Love the allusion to David's role in Magnum Force. My favorite line? " “Go get ‘im, partner!” That was followed quickly by a warm, energetic fullness in his chest that infused him with confidence and the knowledge he was not alone." Nice!

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2. 1. MariaPriest Mon 03 Feb 2020 10:25PM UTC

      

      Thanks, DP! Your assistance was much appreciated. So pleased that line you quoted is your favorite; it's mine as well.

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