tip: katekyou "alternate universe" sort:>words
Oh, I love the changes you made, Maria; very nice. And the whole story is a wonderful blending of S&H and Dirty Harry Callahan. Love the allusion to David's role in Magnum Force. My favorite line? " “Go get ‘im, partner!” That was followed quickly by a warm, energetic fullness in his chest that infused him with confidence and the knowledge he was not alone." Nice!
Thanks, DP! Your assistance was much appreciated. So pleased that line you quoted is your favorite; it's mine as well.