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  1. The feeling of happiness I felt on Kid's behalf in this first chapter can be best surmised as FRANTICALLY TRYING NOT TO SMILE AND SQUIRM AND SQUEAL IN PUBLIC because I may or may not have been eating lunch when I started reading this. You are a danger to me, dear.
    Somehow this story feels incredibly cute and foreboding at the same time, and I look forward to seeing what happens next. Kid is just such an adorable and hopeful puppy dog, and it would hurt me to see his heart get broken. But alas, time will tell.

    Lovely start.
    On to the next chapter!

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    1. Seeing as it is the explicit purpose of this fic to give you cavities, it seems like we're off to a good start! XD

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