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This is actually pretty good. My only complain is that Flauros was disrespectful toward Sheba. Lev named his system "Sheba" because of Flauros' respect toward her, Salem mentions she was the only human Goetia trusted and that if some of the pillar demons acted against his directions (or those important guidelines left behind by Solomon), she had permission to punish them. Raum did disrespect her but Flauros was fond of her.
In this, Lev does not recognize her. Also, I haven't read or played any of Salem yet as of writing this fic (since it isn't out yet on NA), I'm just working off my knowledge of Makeda's myth, her FGO design and general personality. Also trying to avoid Salem spoilers...