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  1. There are many different styles of writing you just have to figure out which one you are most comfortable with.
    That's easier said than done.

    The first thing you could work on is the transition from character to character so go into depth about how they're feeling and what's going on in their mind that could help.

    Another thing you could work on would be the beginning I get and understand that many people begin with talking about their surroundings but sometimes mixing it up a little and opening up with a character speaking to another character or a flashback/ memory or so on so forth.

    Really only time will tell and reading other fanfictions will help with your writing.

    But with all that aside it was a good fan fiction and I can't wait to read more.

    Last Edited Sat 22 Jun 2019 07:23PM EDT

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