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  1. Wow, this was short but quite an amazing read! Really love how you describe things, makes me inspired as that's not necessarily my strong suit. I like how Sora enjoys being devoured like this, that he's willingly letting Vanitas toy with him regardless of whether he can really fight back or not.

    Just a great read! Haven't read much for this pairing but this really makes me want to check them out more! Thank you for sharing!

    J.T.

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    1. description is not my strong suit either, honestly. i think that's why i wanted to write it like this so i could work on that, but i'm glad to know it must have paid off! thank you!

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      1. Of course! I am definitely looking back at this for reference from time to time! Kissing can be hard to describe sometimes without the same tried tropes.

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