tip: katekyou "alternate universe" sort:>words
Really like what you've done here, really hope you continue it in the future! It's rare that I see a fanfiction and think "That is a really authentic portrayal of the characters!", but you managed. This feels like a natural continuation of Dipper and Mabel in their adult years. The Woods kids are good, too. I can easily tell which is the Dipper and which is the Mabel, but they feel different enough that they feel fresh and new. Very promising, and I'd love to see what you do with the characters and setting!