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i haven't seen the video, but the story works great on its own. i think the sparseness actually works better than a longer fic. there's enough hints for the reader to create the rest of the tale and it takes talent to do that
Thank you. That's a big relief, actually, I wasn't sure even as I posted this that there was enough to be able to follow along, but I wanted to treat, so I kind of took a risk. Thanks very much for saying so!