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  1. Well, I’m not sure if this is just me or not, but I didn’t really feel much suspense during this chapter.

    There needs to be a buildup so that whatever insanity that happens after it will have more of an affect. Horror needs suspense or else it would just be “this person just died ok? Ok.”

    Try rewatching the movie or play a horror game and focus on how you feel during those moments when everything is spiraling downward, then put it to your writing by adding in more details about what’s happening in the story.

    I don’t know if that advice will be helpful or not, and once again I’m not sure if the lack of suspense is just me, but it’s just a suggestion.

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