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  1. The previous chapter was mystifying and dark, but the way you set this chapter up was waaayyy more gloomy. I loved it!! And I also really love the way you write action. ;; My poor Sting battles for his life in order to get Rogue the warmth he needed. Even if the action scene wasn't written in short static sentences, you still construed something that was completely vivid in the imagination. Adding in the deity and trying in love, is something that also granted this chapter a more horror-like and suspenseful aspect, because you really want Sting to make it to Rogue. Very sadly, he doesn't (at least not yet) but the tension is very good!! Love ya TGD!!! <3

    Last Edited Sat 29 Dec 2018 03:47AM EST

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