Comment on The Loki System

  1. I'm surprise I didn't leave any comment in this chap coz I sweared I wrote one
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    okay, this chapter made me madder at The Warriors than before. A part of me wishing the end game isn't Fandral/Loki, but if you wish to continue with this pair... I hope you give a very good beating at that narrow minded head coz Loki deserves the best. Heck, maybe Loki will be the Jotunn King, to have a bigot spouse is a no no.
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    btw your writing and story still good. Don't let any complain change your plan for this fict. But if you want to change it, go ahead coz this fict is yours

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