Comment on Destined to Thrive (ABANDONED)

  1. Ah, here's some of what happened.:) I definitely think the flashbacks being in the last chapter and reading it as it happened rather than learning about it now would help with the reader's understanding. If that was the case I think it would be more obvious that Harry was seeing people around him differently. Other characters, like Remus and Sirius would still be rightfully confused, but the readers wouldn't be.

    Also, awesome. Remus and Severus are beautiful. I like seeing how everyone looks now. It's also clear that Snape is a mate without Harry realizing it and without you having to even say it. I wonder what's going to happen now that Harry is with Remus, Sirius, and Severus.

    Thanks for writing a harem story. I love reading them. Sadly, there doesn't seem to be a lot of them out there and even fewer that are well written, so thanks for sharing!:) Do you know how many people will be in Harry's harem? Will they all be male, or a mix of male and female? I'm impatient and would like to know:)

    Thanks again for sharing. This looks really promising so I'm excited to read more.

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