Comment on Bride and Prejudice

  1. Hello!

    Oh my gosh, I am so thrilled to read your review. This kind of review is what a writer has been dreaming. Detailed and meticulous.

    I actually had already finished writing the next chapter, I am a little torn for the fact this fiction's readers had been categorically split into 2. First, a group that hated Mushu... Second, a group that had identified Mushu as a part of Disney's Mulan. I've written a compromised version (although yes, I know many reviewers will tell me to just go ahead with my own version), that I think will please both parties (hopefully).

    I plan to release the next chapter this weekend... :-) And no, your grammar/sentence structure is excellent and easy to understand. As for mine, I have to return the credit to Sara Carlston, my beta reader :-)

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    1. YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!

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