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  1. Oh this is so so good!! I loved their dynamic, I love how you captured them missing each other so much for so long. It was intense, but at the midst of it was this relatively calm, beautiful moment.
    I adored how Sage was the weaker of the two, but still had a hope that he'd be able to keep Zenith from going too far. It killed me how far Zenith was willing to go just to get his brother back.

    Five years gone, and Zenith was a blade reforged by witchfire.
    This line was beautiful.

    He had not seen that freckle formed. He had not kissed that worry from his brow.
    And this one made my heart ache for them.

    Thank you so much <3 I'm so happy with this!!

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    1. Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it -- there were so many good ideas in your letter, I was spoiled for choice.

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