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  1. This is a nice piece, but it moves too fast as flashes of memories that don't seem too connected. You have a lot to build on here that could be more than moments, or flashes in a pan, if you would take the time to illustrate that to build the connection. The moments are lovely; they really are telling, but the piece moves really fast and too much time passes without making a connection.

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