tip: lex m/m (mature OR explicit)
I was curious to read this story, it's an intriguing pairing and cute concept, but I just couldn't quite get through it. The whole not capitalizing words thing got to me. I mean, it seems to be an intentional style choice because you didn't capitalize a single word in the story, I just don't understand why. I don't mean to be too discouraging, certainly you can make whatever style choices you like. Just be aware that something like this will tend to turn off certain readers.
well aware, thanks