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  1. Sorry I missed Kudos the first chapter. My brain is rough these days.

    Loki is such a bastard and a child. I love how HE is a pouty bitch at the end of the chapter because Brynja asks the very sensible question, "Why are you being nice?" Poor baby with his manfeels being hurt!

    I love how you wrote the whole scene with the flogging, and Brynja's increasing arousal and confusion as she goes deeper and deeper, and Loki's surprising, um, surprise that he was even more right about her than he knew. Wow I am eloquent this morning. Normally I would quote a particularly hot line or sequence, but this was one of those pieces that for me only works as a whole, each moment and line rolling into the next as the writing and the subject both build to a profound and shaking climax.

    So, in other words, good chapter.

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    1. Yeah, what misreall said. I think I'm too dazed by the chapter to be articulate.

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      1. Hahah, you had plenty of time to prep for it silly!

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        1. You can't prep for that flogging scene. No way...

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    2. " Normally I would quote a particularly hot line or sequence, but this was one of those pieces that for me only works as a whole, each moment and line rolling into the next as the writing and the subject both build to a profound and shaking climax."

      That comment is worth a billion quotes, thank you so much! I worked my ass off on this little heifer, I'm glad you liked it.

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      1. I can see the work in that it seemed effortless. Seriously, great job.

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        1. Thank you. ❤️❤️❤️

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